Sunday, June 10, 2012

Novel Entry 1 - Prologue (1 of 2)

This is the first part of several chapters I have completed on a possibly never to be completed novel.  To be honest, I feel like current events are nipping my heels and I may soon enough be writing historical fiction.  Truthfully, I owe Lizard Farmer (http://thelizardfarmer.wordpress.com/) a hat tip because I was reading some work linked on his site tonight and thought "why not?".  I will be releasing more over the coming weeks and hopefully even make some progress towards completion.  Please provide commentary, particularly to the accuracy (or lack of) of technology or anything else you notice that seems... "off".  Nevertheless, please enjoy:

Prologue
            The south Texas sun had long since been replaced by the full harvest moon, but the day’s arid temperatures had not fully retreated.  The huge low-hanging orange disk in the night sky appeared so close that one might reach out and touch it.  The wind had refused to blow for days, amplifying the heat from earlier.  Despite the miserable conditions, they were relieved; this would be their final patrol before heading back to their redoubt on the tip of South Padre Island for a much needed break.  The members of the Texas State Guard’s First Regiment were indeed soldiers, but none of them had real combat experience prior to this.  The Alamo Guards were mostly known for their work in the aftermath of hurricanes and occasional support on the border.  They took their new role in stride, as best they could, but none of the men in the squad had signed up for action like this.  They had all removed their name tapes early in the operation after reports surfaced that some of the soldier’s families had started receiving death threats; they now communicated strictly by code name.
The three-story adobe-style mansion sitting on two acres just north of Lasara had served as their forward operating base for the past week.  It was surrounded by fallow fields on three sides and the small southwestern town to the south; the view atop the high flat roof was better than anywhere else for miles.  The home’s cast-in-place concrete walls provided excellent protection from small arms fire and the surrounding eight foot high perimeter brick wall afforded them additional cover and security; in short, it was as perfect a location as was available.  They wondered who the previous owner was, and if there would ever come a day when he could return.  Pictures still hung on the wall: group shots while on vacation, during holidays and other memorable moments in the life of the now displaced family that once dwelled here.  The owner’s decision to install an indoor swimming pool was now a welcome reprieve for the weary soldiers and a boost to morale in between patrols; it helped wash away the thoughts of the brutal south Texas heat and fierce gun battles with men known for their vicious treatment of prisoners.  The Zetas and the Gulf Cartel had formed an uneasy alliance to push the gringos north; once the gringos were sufficiently broken, they would divide the spoils and territory amongst themselves.  The Z-G, as they were commonly referred to now, had developed a brutal reputation for flaying prisoners alive; this reputation had resulted in a mass exodus of locals.
The unit’s squad leader, now referred to simply as Barret, leaned over several aerial, topographic and road maps spread out haphazardly on the billiards table in the salon as he discussed the specifics of their final patrol with six of his men.  “Our scouts have observed several suspected hostile vehicles in and around Raymondville earlier this evening.  The Z-G never practice light discipline, so they should be fairly simple to relocate.  We leave out in two hours; be ready.  We will locate, identify and engage the targets if they are in fact Z-G.  Remember, all radio communication is to be in coded Spanish; if our comm. is being monitored by them, or anyone else hopefully it will sound like just another Z-G dispute over the airwaves.  We are more likely to avoid a third party encounter or Z-G reinforcements that way.  I want redundant functionality checks on all equipment, especially the infrared lighting on the Humvees; this is our last night on vacation and we don’t need any surprises.  We’ve lost too many squads already, and I am particularly partial to this one.” 
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At 2100 hours, sixteen men quietly pulled out of their lavish forward operating base into the disputed territory that was once south Texas.  The mood of the men was probably not unlike the mood of a different group of Texans in a small Spanish mission nearly two hundred years prior.  Barret had even taken his namesake from a kindred soul that had fought and died in that same mission.  Their situation was not much different from their ancestors’ situation either; the redoubt they had established on South Padre Island had been hugely successful in combating the cartels, but they had begun to gain the attention of the cartels as well.  The Alamo Guards had planted moored mines in the Port Mansfield Cut nearly forty miles north, effectively blocking the only safe passage into the waters beyond the barrier island.  The cartels had only two options on the water:  travel north one hundred miles and battle Port Aransas, or bring the fight to South Padre Island; they had decided on the island.  The state guards had repelled several combined land and sea assaults from the causeway and the pass, but the assaults were getting fiercer.  The Alamo Guards of South Padre Island knew it was only a matter of time before they would all die, if reinforcements and supplies did not arrive soon.
After several minutes of driving, they located their quarry.  With all vehicles’ lights off, except for the imperceptible infrared lighting that increased the effectiveness of their night vision equipment, they closed to within five hundred feet of four small pickups slowly cruising east towards Raymondville on Highway 186.  The big harvest moon was their enemy tonight as well – it illuminated the plains, and everything in it.  An observant occupant in one of the pickup trucks would soon detect the four Humvees slowly approaching their six.  One of the guardsmen popped open the top hatch on the front Humvee and braced his elbows as he peered through his night vision binoculars; the trucks’ beds were filled with silhouettes of riders and their easily identifiable AK-47 rifles.  He climbed back down into the Humvee as he said, “Our scouts were right Barret, those ain’t cowboys.”
Barret keyed his radio and tapped his finger against the microphone twice slowly and twice quickly – their code for hostiles.  The four Humvees accelerated in unison, lurching forward with diesel engines roaring like chupacabras.  By the time the cartels realized they were being pursued, the angry three ton monsters were nearly on top of them; the men in the back of the pickups were too preoccupied with bracing for impact and yelling “Go!” in thick Spanish that they never considered returning fire. 
The Humvees were four wide and nearing 70 MPH as they reached the two rear pickups; the trucks’ drivers were trying to accelerate but were hopelessly blocked by the slower reactions of their amigos in front of them.  One of the rear pickups jerked a hard left off the highway onto a dusty farm road; the high speed transition from asphalt to sand and gravel spun the light rear end of the truck around and flung a man from the bed of the truck thirty feet before a sudden thud and one final bounce.  The remaining rear truck was no match for the two Humvees that slammed their massive winches and steel brush guards into the tailgate; an explosion of screams and wrinkling sheet metal pierced the night as the pickup lurched forward and was then pushed along the highway like some strange, landside Texan barge and tugboat.  As the two outside Humvees launched forward as if propelled from a slingshot, two men popped the top hatches of the center Humvees and engaged their M134 Miniguns on the rear pickup; they each let nearly thirty rounds of 7.62 NATO loose and annihilated the truck in less than a second.
The two front pickups were now well aware of what fate awaited them, and roared forward with speeds that were unexpected from their rusted and dented exteriors.  The two Humvees were nearing their top speed and closing quickly, but the trucks began to slowly pull away.  The riders in the back had all witnessed the two Miniguns eviscerate the other pickup, and had no desire to elicit a similar response directed towards them; they suddenly disappeared below the walls of the trucks’ beds.  Barret keyed up his radio again and spoke to his squad in coded Spanish, “It’s okay, let them pull off some; I’d rather not have AK rounds flying at us.  Let’s see if they lead us somewhere; if they get too far ahead, we’ll just use the Miniguns.”
The pickups swerved in different directions at an intersecting dirt road; The Humvees split up in pairs and began to gain back lost ground.  The drivers realized the flaw in their evasive maneuver and within a mile were back on the straight asphalt drag of 186 as they blew past the green sign city limit sign that read:  “Raymondville City Limit Pop. 9733.”  A mile into town as they passed the boxy, two-story City Hall, the Humvees’ radio squawked to life, “Barret, we’ve got company at our twelve on the 77 overpass; they look like Humvees, but smaller.  Maybe MRAPS?” 
“Yea, I see them.  Those boys are a long way from home; I’ve seen Federales a few times, but no U.S. Military south of Corpus Christi in months.  Let’s welcome them to the great state of Texas.  Front two Humvees, get a man ready up top; as soon as the pickup trucks are under the overpass, hit them with the Mk 19.  If a couple 40 mm grenades under the feet of our boys up top doesn’t scare them back to Corpus, then maybe they will be worth having around.”
The lighter and faster pickup trucks had a ten second lead on the Humvees as they approached the overpass.  They would occasionally perform a slalom maneuver in the highway, as if drivers anticipated another hailstorm from the M134 Miniguns at any moment; their unease helped the Humvees maintain a closer tail than they otherwise would have.  Barret gripped the radio’s microphone fiercely in anticipation with his gloved hand; he preferred to use the old style radio microphone while in the vehicle, it reminded him of a different time when wars were fought in distant lands rather than American farm towns.  Twenty seconds until the fireworks. 
Barret leaned forward, squinting through the front windshield with his night vision goggles as a smirk crept across his face; he keyed the mic, “Everybody ready up top?”  Two affirmatives echoed back at him almost in unison.  “Hold for my order.”  He craned his neck up and noticed the guns on top of the three MRAPs.  Fifteen seconds. 
The driver of the lead pickup was sweating and swearing profusely; at this point, he had no promise of a next breath.  Their only hope, in his mind, was to make it to the overpass, swerve across two lanes to jump the highway’s edge curb and pray he could manage to retain some semblance of control of the truck at 80 mph to guide it around the sharp curve under the bridge that would take them south on to highway 77 – and survival.  He knew the Humvees could never negotiate the turn in time, so just maybe they would turn their attention to the other truck and engage them while he made his way to Avondale and beyond.  Ten seconds. 
  Barret studied what he could now identify as MRAP M-ATVs with their armaments pointed ominously downward.  Eight seconds.  His mind had been trying to process why they would allow friendlies to sweep under their barrels – unless; no – impossible, he could see the markings on the vehicles from this distance.  Seven seconds.  They were obviously U.S. military.  And yet, something was wrong.  Six seconds. 

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